Monday, May 19, 2008

This weekend was a disaster. I was not able to sign up any new partner in my Avon business. I also did not get any new customers. Saturday evening I was a model in the fashion show. It was fun I really enjoy runway work and would like to do more. When Positive Approach was up and running I was modeling often. Now its only once in a while.

Woke up Sunday with a migraine that made me sick to the stomach. We left the hall early.

I am composing a letter to offer Personal Shoppers Services for Business owners.

Hello, I am Gail Galloway the Avon Representative in your area. I would like to introduce to you the Personal Shopping Service that I offer to Business owners.

This Personal Shopping Service is the easy way to give thoughtful gift to family and friends. All I need to know is the name of the person, relationship to you, favorite items or hobbies and I can then find the perfect Avon gift for your family member or friend.

Avon is so much more than perfume and make up. We have clothing, shoes, handbags and jewelry. In our Inspirational Treasures brochures which has a unique collection to enrich the spirit and soothe the soul. Home Expressions brochure which has beautiful items to decorate your home. Mark Magalog which is part magazine and part catalog.

Still not sure of what gift to give, then give your loved one the power to pick their own gift by giving gift certificates. They are only redeemable by me so the gift certificate and the Avon brochure and Mark brochure will be gift wrapped together.

When you purchase something through the Person Shopper program gift wrapping is included at no additional charge. It will be delivered to you at your office.

What do you think? Can I make some improvement? Any feed back will be greatly appreciated.

2 comments:

Familyof2 said...

I like it :)

You however have an error in your letter: Its fragmented--In our Inspirational Treasures brochures which has a unique collection to enrich the spirit and soothe the soul.

Lavon said...

How about.

In our Inspirational Treasure brochure you will find a unique collection to enrich the spirit and soothe the soul.